用路标词带听众走完一个例子
How should we explain the example? Explain your reasons and next step.
你的主旨已经是减少重复订单。现在要展示:门店 A 已订茶叶,门店 B 看到状态后不再重复订。你需要把例子讲出顺序。
1 · 先听见真实对话
Colleague: How should we explain the example?
You: We should signpost the example with first, then and finally.
Colleague: How does the example show the benefit?
You: A visible order status helps Store B see that the tea is already ordered.
Colleague: What should we connect the example to?
You: We should connect the example to our key message about avoiding duplicate orders.
2 · 理解表达在这里做了什么
key message
the one main idea people should remember
My key message is that one shared board can prevent duplicate orders.
key message 不是把所有信息都放进第一句话;选出这次发言的主要意思。signpost
tell listeners what comes next
I will signpost the talk with “first” and “then”.
这里 signpost 作动词,指用语言提示结构;不是读出所有幻灯片标题就一定清楚。takeaway
the useful idea listeners leave with
The main takeaway is to check the board before ordering.
此处 takeaway 是名词,不是外卖,也不是动词 take away;要点最好与听众能做的事相连。3 · 跟读后,换成自己的信息
We should signpost the example with first, then and finally.
讲法:用 first、then、finally 提示顺序。
A visible order status helps Store B see that the tea is already ordered.
作用:B 店看到茶叶已经下单。
We should connect the example to our key message about avoiding duplicate orders.
衔接:把例子接回主旨,避免只讲故事。
We can finish with the takeaway: check first, then order if needed.
结尾:把流程压缩成可记忆的动作。
保留沟通意图,换掉人物、文件或时间。简单而准确的句子同样有效。
4 · 接住对方的话
How should we explain the example?
讲法:用 first、then、finally 提示顺序。
查看一种可行回答
We should signpost the example with first, then and finally.
How does the example show the benefit?
作用:B 店看到茶叶已经下单。
查看一种可行回答
A visible order status helps Store B see that the tea is already ordered.
What should we connect the example to?
衔接:把例子接回主旨,避免只讲故事。
查看一种可行回答
We should connect the example to our key message about avoiding duplicate orders.
5 · 换一个情境,再试一次
What if a listener misses a step?
What if a listener misses a step?
Address the changed condition. Choose a practical next step and explain why it helps.
- My response addresses the changed condition.
- I explain one practical action and its likely effect.
- I make the next step clear.
6 · 明天不看答案,再想一次
What does Store A do first?